Body
The body of your essay is where you clearly state and elaborate on the arguments, points or ideas that back up your claim.
The number of paragraphs in the body of your essay will depend on how many individual points you need to make to develop your argument and, of course, the required word count.
The general structure of a body paragraph is:
- Topic sentence: States the main point of the paragraph in one sentence.
- Supporting sentences: Supports the main point by providing justification/explanation of the point, evidence from your reading and a comment on the significance of the evidence.
- Concluding sentence/s: Links to the main idea and the next paragraph.
Essay body sample sentence
Bilingualism can have a positive impact on both cognition and brain function. Despite differing evidence that secondary language learning can result in cognitive overload, overwhelming research consensus has shown that well-developed bilingualism enhances one's intellectual ability in certain areas. Experiments in psychology conducted by Bialystok (2011) show that bilinguals outperform monolinguals in certain cognitive tasks that involve sorting conflicting data. Bilingualism is also a contributing factor in delaying dementia (Alladi et al, 2013; Mortimer, 2013). An earlier study by Alber and Obler, 1978 (cited in Cummins 1994) goes even further in stating that bilingual learners mature earlier than mono-lingual learners in terms of linguistic abstractions, because their brains have developed the ability to engage with the syntax of two different languages. These are some of the cognitive benefits of learning more than one language. However, language acquisition with adults may prove more problematic as cognitive rigidity may interfere or hinder their ability to process increasingly complex grammatical structures (DeKeyser, 2015). Thus, although more problematic for older learners, encouraging the learning of two or more languages can offer long lasting intellectual benefits.
Essay body elements
- Background statements/contextualises the topic
Bilingualism can have a positive impact on both cognition and brain function.
- Contribute to thesis statement
Despite differing evidence that secondary language learning can result in cognitive overload, overwhelming research consensus has shown that well-developed bilingualism enhances one's intellectual ability in certain areas.
- Brief summary of the main topic/arguments/points
Experiments in psychology conducted by Bialystok (2011) show that bilinguals outperform monolinguals in certain cognitive tasks that involve sorting conflicting data. Bilingualism is also a contributing factor in delaying dementia (Alladi et al, 2013; Mortimer, 2013). An earlier study by Alber and Obler, 1978 (cited in Cummins 1994) goes even further in stating that bilingual learners mature earlier than mono-lingual learners in terms of linguistic abstractions, because their brains have developed the ability to engage with the syntax of two different languages.
- Contribute to thesis statement
These are some of the cognitive benefits of learning more than one language. However, language acquisition with adults may prove more problematic as cognitive rigidity may interfere or hinder their ability to process increasingly complex grammatical structures (DeKeyser, 2015).
- Brief summary of the main topic/arguments/ points
Thus, although more problematic for older learners, encouraging the learning of two or more languages can offer long lasting intellectual benefits.